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Very creative and cool

The title says it all. I really found it relaxing but unsettling at the same time.

Nice stuff

Awesome!

I really liked the emotion you obviously put in this and it was extremely relaxing ambient music.

Great Job!

Lamplighter responds:

Thank you very much, I appreciate it!

Awesome!

I like this a lot! Maybe a bit more of a variance is needed. I am not sure exactly why it is as long as it is if you intended it to be a loop anyways, as there sounds like there are very few changes in dynamics, sonority, tempo or chord progression.

Nothing Special

Its just beats, and pretty standard beats at that. It sounds like the product of an hours work and nothing more than that.

Souljaadam responds:

LOL. Ahaha.
Thanks for the review.

The name was fucking awesome

The name was awesome.

The Song was pretty fucking good except for the fact that your beat/bass got annoying and pretty much made me hate the song by a minute in and then it got even worse. If you did something different down there you would have some good shit on your hands.

Huge Improvement!

Nice dude, its starting to turn into something that I would definitely enjoy dancing to at a club or something. Ill break my review down into things I like, then things that have to be changed and finally then artistic suggestions.

I really liked your change of instruments. I also liked the effects that you applied, it makes it sound much more professional. It also has a really nice punchy beat, which is great for a dance song. The ending effect was good.

You need to add another instrument to harmonize with the melody at some point during the song. I was thinking at a natural point around halfway. The song is too long not to add another part or even more to it. You also need some sort of break from the melody into something different somewhere after the halfway point. As reviewers are comparing you to BassHunter, listen to Welcome To Rainbow. He has a nice break in there.

Ok, this is where it goes more subjective and depends on artistic vision. I agree that it is too slow, however, I think what you should do is keep it at that speed for one run through of your complete melodic pattern and then speed it up with a nice transition. I think that would be really cool. I, personally, would also try to patch up the melody even more and make it even more catchy. You have a perfectly fine melody, don't get me wrong, it just is missing that characteristic that leaves me humming it after I listen to it.

You have made a lot of progress, but you still have a lot of work to do. Keep at it and keep me informed, I am very curious to see how this little baby turns out.

Great!

It really got me. Great job.

ShadowWingz responds:

Thanks

Chill

I liked it. Extremely relaxing. Perhaps a change of instruments is needed though for the melody. But that really wasn't a deal breaker for me

kingtaco16 responds:

maybe i might try that that
thanks for the nine

The Magic Chords

I see you have found the magic chords. Have fun with them, as they truly are magic.

There is a lot of potential in this one buddy. Here is some advice to keep you going.

I found the melody a bit too random. If you could really work on making a catchy one with a bit more of a ptter that at the same time wasn't too repetitive that would be great.

Also, some more tracks are needed. There are many times during the song where the song was just too simple. You need to add some more depth.

Finally, you need to mess around with your arsenal of pitch changing, tempo changing, octave changing etc. tools so you can spice things up as the song progresses.

Good work for your 7th try though and keep it on coming!

montehawks responds:

Ok will do! Thanks so much for the advice! I'll work on a more complex version in the near future, and I'll work on adding effects and whatnot to the song as well.

Thanks so very much again!

-Monte

good but...

Considering it was all done on the computer it was pretty good, but it was almost painfully slow. At the beginning, when it was just the bass line, I felt like I was listening to a 6 year old at at their first piano recital. Speed it up, or add more to it, but as it stands it is only mediocre.

With that being said. I liked your melody.

kirbonium responds:

thx man, ya I know what you mean by it being kinda slow. I was going to add more but this is kind of a small homework assignment from my piano teacher and I just wanted to see what people thought of it. I appreciate the feedback :)

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